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From a Bunn or perhaps a Krupp,
You pour the coffee into the cup
And then you stir in some cream,
Changing the whole coloration scheme,
Moving slowly, little by little. The lighter hues
Expand throughout until they diffuse
Into a new complexion, like every furrow
On your brow, the change is imperceptible but thorough.
From a Bunn or perhaps a Krupp,
You pour the coffee into the cup
And then you stir in some cream,
Changing the whole coloration scheme,
Moving slowly, little by little. The lighter hues
Expand throughout until they diffuse
Into a new complexion, like every furrow
On your brow, the change is imperceptible but thorough.
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